tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post6533826374964060055..comments2009-11-28T17:38:48.325-08:00Myne Whitmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07595087387069634003noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-39530707291803761002009-11-28T17:38:48.325-08:002009-11-28T17:38:48.325-08:00this is really good...can feel the emotion... n love the very last line..cos at d end of d day, it hurts wen u realize that ur emotions are only one sided.. very eloquent expression.Shelshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07000524463838946323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-67760489923330543192009-10-15T18:37:44.589-07:002009-10-15T18:37:44.589-07:00awww....that is beautiful!Blowing Blessings Your Wayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00063729360732047180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-83336355312651290992009-10-06T08:16:35.032-07:002009-10-06T08:16:35.032-07:00Thanks all for reading, I really appreciate your comments so please keep them coming.<br /><br />@ Nana, your comprehensive feedback is so welcome. I never did any literature all the help I get is appreciated. Thank you.Myne Whitmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07595087387069634003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-37927767522254851802009-10-06T01:16:33.827-07:002009-10-06T01:16:33.827-07:00A wonderfully simple ballad. Yes, Myne, you are a writer! And as I read this poem, I was arrested by the transferred feelings running wild through it. The Persona says &quot;I want you to need me&quot; and uses such passionate imagery of need and hunger. And yet, your instinct tells you irresistibly that it is really the Persona who needs the other person. And then the very last line of the very last verse reveals it - &quot;Need me like I need you&quot;. Very simple words really, but breathing with a powerful life of their own. Right from the first line, your poem promised internal consistency and integrity. Therefore, the end came as no surprise. As a poet (somewhat) myself and a student of poetry, I am really impressed.Nana Yaw Asieduhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11618359074984443470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-31706088709333776342009-10-05T22:46:37.612-07:002009-10-05T22:46:37.612-07:00&quot;I want you to need me,Need me like I need you&quot;..<br /><br />Such a beautiful poem..Like to echo one of Blogoratti&#39;s comment on one of my poems where he said LOVE can be written in a million and one way..This is true for this poem and like Geebee rightly observed,it is or can only be sweet when it is reciprocated and not a one way street.. <br /><br />Good job Myne..You should do this more often..TRYBEShttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18256053296221593013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-21339245117594889772009-10-05T22:32:05.402-07:002009-10-05T22:32:05.402-07:00Well written,but no one to send this one to,lolmuyiwahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05681477440225378294noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-63132252040091298422009-10-05T22:23:39.678-07:002009-10-05T22:23:39.678-07:00omydaiz i dint comment yet! kai! so y did i run and read it.<br />Me likeRenehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00393782396724702703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-13031430549854525282009-10-05T18:30:40.704-07:002009-10-05T18:30:40.704-07:00there is love...<br />in the house, lol<br />NICE!!!David.фаворит Бога номер-одинhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06067578538270340394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-13750414892003534652009-10-05T17:09:38.876-07:002009-10-05T17:09:38.876-07:00Reminds me of this song by one of my favourite bands &#39;Letters to Cleo&#39; it&#39;s called &#39;I want you to want me&#39;<br /><br />Nice poem. Edward should write it for Gladys!Lady Xhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05905725300292828816noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-55209715237226513542009-10-05T16:49:17.906-07:002009-10-05T16:49:17.906-07:00@ Bagucci, I never could write dark to save my life. My muse dries up on that side. Don&#39;t know why.<br /><br />@ Blogoratti, Thanks<br /><br />@Nice Anon, Yes ooo, thanks for your kind comments.Myne Whitmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07595087387069634003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-53297001340276040622009-10-05T16:08:16.603-07:002009-10-05T16:08:16.603-07:00reminds of the saying &quot; I want you to want me&quot; How nice. Must be beautiful abi? loving someone and being loved backNice Anonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11821297787183068066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-29582534599385904142009-10-05T15:03:40.691-07:002009-10-05T15:03:40.691-07:00Oooh special someone. Wink wink*<br />Great stuff.blogorattihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12821621371176285384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-43420780403053544322009-10-05T14:42:38.298-07:002009-10-05T14:42:38.298-07:00drip raw emotion.. beautifully done... i should try my hands on something less dark for a change..akaBaguccihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12917175291340775701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-928430184513748372009-10-05T13:28:58.436-07:002009-10-05T13:28:58.436-07:00@ GNG, we share the same taste in music. CD actually inspired this.<br /><br />@ Geebee, you&#39;re absolutely correct. &quot;...To love and be loved in return&quot;<br /><br />@ neefemi, thank you so much.Myne Whitmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07595087387069634003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-42369813512376396772009-10-05T12:57:56.803-07:002009-10-05T12:57:56.803-07:00i swear....you stole this from my heart....this is beautifulneefemihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00770543533340729142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-17892188224048645372009-10-05T12:45:30.446-07:002009-10-05T12:45:30.446-07:00This is a cry that proceeds straight from the heart. I can imagine the feeling. On the other hand, it definitely hurts when you care so much about someone and somehow that person just doesn&#39;t seem to feel the slightest thing for you. I guess love is best enjoyed when it is two-sided. Nice poem here, Myne. It&#39;s bound to hit someone somewhere. Somehow, people need to be more sensitive about the feelings of others and reciprocate accordingly.Geebeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06865221163860159914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-11813804095204406912009-10-05T12:39:37.144-07:002009-10-05T12:39:37.144-07:00Oh, this reminds me of a Celine Dion song that I love. Your someone special is very lucky indeed! :)goodnaijagirlhttp://goodnaijagirl.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com