tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post6481237497618453561..comments2009-10-31T23:13:31.888-07:00Myne Whitmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07595087387069634003noreply@blogger.comBlogger43125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-68769109420121495902009-10-31T23:13:31.888-07:002009-10-31T23:13:31.888-07:00OMG! This is so good!!!! I totally love the rhyming scheme...<br /><br />&quot;tender repair&quot;! I love it. Everything about this is just perfect!Ms. 'dufahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08500315507490299815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-12985238956340588322009-10-31T18:23:55.833-07:002009-10-31T18:23:55.833-07:00awww, i&#39;ll give you tender repair. everyone needs them some tender repair. very lovely poemBibihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01776391017344985000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-14095309934969804412009-10-31T18:23:50.645-07:002009-10-31T18:23:50.645-07:00awww, i&#39;ll give you tender repair. everyone needs them some tender repair. very lovely poemBibihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01776391017344985000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-62550031050625386752009-10-31T11:22:09.479-07:002009-10-31T11:22:09.479-07:00am guessing am last today...lolyankeenaijababehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15578298912840032898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-87430588653680201752009-10-31T11:21:51.817-07:002009-10-31T11:21:51.817-07:00wow! this is some deep insightful post...girl, u got it always for us.yankeenaijababehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15578298912840032898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-2124271475496492982009-10-31T10:57:28.429-07:002009-10-31T10:57:28.429-07:00&quot;I&#39;ll give you tender repair&quot; - Ilove that line...aeedeeaeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18287574113066418928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-27186869382099953752009-10-31T10:54:10.801-07:002009-10-31T10:54:10.801-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.aeedeeaeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18287574113066418928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-72613427200748345862009-10-31T10:38:19.085-07:002009-10-31T10:38:19.085-07:00awww...i love it!aeedeeaeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18287574113066418928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-28097942547782936552009-10-31T06:49:54.923-07:002009-10-31T06:49:54.923-07:00So simple yet lyrical...well done.Parakeethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14034748785098588120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-40983102901771076302009-10-31T06:42:21.211-07:002009-10-31T06:42:21.211-07:00As I see it, not too deep, which has its allure. The language is lyrical, and you did well not to run out of words for the basic rhyme scheme of AAAA.Nana Yaw Asieduhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11618359074984443470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-6878421365345384532009-10-31T02:11:10.838-07:002009-10-31T02:11:10.838-07:00whaoh! i likey, it makes great sense. thumbs up!Femme Loungehttp://www.femmelounge.orgnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-25183083293398221032009-10-31T02:10:54.279-07:002009-10-31T02:10:54.279-07:00whaoh! i likey, it makes great sense. thumbs up!Femme Loungehttp://www.femmelounge.orgnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-82363855765437514522009-10-30T18:44:56.145-07:002009-10-30T18:44:56.145-07:00i really like your poems o..BSNChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13543021213550898347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-86656430788575191362009-10-30T09:21:19.046-07:002009-10-30T09:21:19.046-07:00I am blushing now, LOL. But you won&#39;t see it though..Thank you all. I appreciate.Myne Whitmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07595087387069634003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-72540725224335430662009-10-30T05:22:50.046-07:002009-10-30T05:22:50.046-07:00this is deep.....and beautiful<br /><br />i am privileged to know a great writer like you<br /><br /><br />u r allowed to blush!Omotee!http://www.blogger.com/profile/10533901147081186591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-66034671680705939552009-10-30T03:15:24.259-07:002009-10-30T03:15:24.259-07:00So much tenderness and honesty, i really like it. <br /><br />Bravo chica, you&#39;ve got a serious gift :-)Vimbaihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14565219588529872692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-68673456354659835022009-10-30T01:59:11.767-07:002009-10-30T01:59:11.767-07:00deep..i like and you really did make it rhyme..<br /><br />talk abt extraordinary love<br /><br />i sent you a mail..histreasurehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05925905506788362848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-5683291582707335282009-10-30T01:25:16.170-07:002009-10-30T01:25:16.170-07:00This is beautiful.<br />I think I love this poem and more.posekyerehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15870664935467967524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-90798241165229970122009-10-29T20:14:01.901-07:002009-10-29T20:14:01.901-07:00I am highly impressed that you managed to make the whole thing rhyme. Damn!<br /><br /><i>I promise our love will not be mere</i> - lol I like this line a lotmiss.fabhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15611213854215688654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-4944394255510851072009-10-29T20:11:23.835-07:002009-10-29T20:11:23.835-07:00beautiful beautiful. Myne you should let me &quot;steal&quot; some of your poems enh...Abena Opokuahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13860380148395393230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-65009506273979560192009-10-29T18:25:12.152-07:002009-10-29T18:25:12.152-07:00love it!!!Blowing Blessings Your Wayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00063729360732047180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-54391152500525296552009-10-29T14:59:36.385-07:002009-10-29T14:59:36.385-07:00wow... that was beautiful! I&#39;m totally feeling the raw emotion behind that. Intense!Fiercehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00919150204236645832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-15848382084192283422009-10-29T14:48:09.753-07:002009-10-29T14:48:09.753-07:00Thanks all.<br /><br />@Cici, no I composed it myself.Myne Whitmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07595087387069634003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-51675970033185057942009-10-29T13:50:33.941-07:002009-10-29T13:50:33.941-07:00Very inspiring.<br /><br />If love is a five stanza tail-rhyme, you just defined it.Enochhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01123477530241681915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3006786616951437614.post-24419373130420111392009-10-29T13:46:56.827-07:002009-10-29T13:46:56.827-07:00nice...did u write this or it`s extract from somewhere?cicihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00012589777363132269noreply@blogger.com