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Update + To the one I love (Poem)

This is to confirm that our next contributor is Realnaijabloke. He's going to be writing from Chinedu's point of view. Was he really an armed robber or was it a joke? Will he call Iphey again or did she fail the test? Check back tomorrow to read and vote for the next chapter. Remember, the first to comment on it will win an ebook. If you're no good at stalking but you want the book, head over to LULU and download your copy now! Mynewhitman's Storefront

While we wait, enjoy the poem. TO THE ONE I LOVE

I love to drink and dine
And I’ll love to feed you fine
I love to dance in line
And I’ll love to make you mine
I love the number nine
And I’ll not see you pine

I love any joke funny
And I’ll make your life sunny
I love an exciting journey
And I’ll love to call you honey
I love but it's not for money
And I’ll love to make you bonnie

I love a good story well told
And I'll love your virtues extolled
I love to see two lovers old
And I'll love to give you a ring of gold
I love you to have and to hold
And I'll love you till my bones are cold

28 feedbacks:

burramint said...

How come I can be first now, but when its time to win the book I can't make it! I love the poem though and can't wait to read naijablokes's entry! So excited

Original Mgbeke said...

I go loooove ooo. :-D

sunnyside said...

interesting rhyme scheme

KONFIRMED said...

hmmm me too i wan love o

Fabulo-la said...

I'll love you till my bones grow cold. Amen to that!
me sef wan love..well ..not rlly.
lool!

Myne Whitman said...

Thanks all..

@Fabulola, what do you mean, "not really?"

leggy said...

waiting for the next chapter

muyiwa said...

nice poem

akaBagucci said...

the poetry pieces are the way i like them... short and full of weight...i'm way behind on the story again!

Neo said...

cant wait for the next chapter, maybe i'll be first again, will u give me another ebook...lol. Or i can claim the spot against future giveaways!

Harry-Rami Itie said...

love dis!!! go myne!!!

My Bestfriend's Little Sister(MBLS) said...

Loving the rhyme scheme!

blogoratti said...

Lovely read..keep 'em coming.

shorty said...

Nice poem,,waiting for new chapter.

Tricia said...

I really love the flow of this poem..looking forward to more

Blowing Blessings Your Way said...

cute poem!!! awww

Myne Whitman said...

Thanks all, I really appreciate your words. The next chapter should be ready by tomorrow morning.

Nita said...

Beautiful poem, loving the rhyme scheme. Any chace of joining the love posse? lol

chayoma said...

Lovely poem.
I love to love :)

Beauty Goodone said...

This poem is meant for the one you love. That means, it is addressed to your SO. I no fit comment but abeg love him even after the gold ring. Lol

Tisha said...

have not seen this. would love to be a contributor, just tell me the criteria and whats necessary

Rene said...

i'm so way bhine...love d poem

Abena Opokua said...

eish you must reaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllly loooove!!

neefemi said...

nice poem

Bomi Jolly said...

Very nice poem - I enjoyed reading it! I have subscribed to your blog...:)

Miss Natural said...

lol I love that you love and the way you show you love. beautiful poem!

Miss Fizzy said...

I love the poem especially the last part "I'll love you till my bones are cold"

Did you write it?

Myne Whitman said...

Yeah Miss Fizzy, I wrote the poem. ll the ones on this website are written by me. Thanks for the nice comments.

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