Friday, November 6, 2009

I go love ooo...

Ayo laughed and scooted further up the bed. “Oh so you’re up to eating already?”

“Yes, in fact I was ravenous after I woke up this morning. It felt like my abdomen was stuck to my spine. There were eggs for breakfast and steamed rice for lunch; not the best but bearable. I’m still waiting on dinner which will soon be here.”

“How long will you be here?”

“Two nights. I’ll probably be discharged tomorrow evening.”

“Two nights is not so bad. It must be expensive, though.” Jennifer chipped in.

“Aunt Isioma already has a health plan with them; it’s not really that expensive. Also I don’t even think I need stay tonight as I have no problems drinking fluids.”

“It’s been a while since I last saw your aunt. How is she?”

“She’s fine. She was with me through out yesterday. She was the one that called my mother and brothers and Edward too. She was here this morning and will soon be back.”

“That’s very nice of her. Your aunt is always so gracious.”

Gladys nodded. In the year since she’d arrived in Lagos, her aunt had become like a second mother to her. They had grown even closer after she had confided about her late husband’s lack of sympathy and the unhappy prison their marriage had become.

“You said last Sunday that Edward was out of the country and won’t be back till the weekend." Jennifer scooted forward on the armchair. "How did he take the news of you being admitted in hospital?”

“He called last night but I was still too weak to carry on a conversation. He did say he’d wrap up his business and return home as soon as possible.”

“This love is really catching him…”

“I go love ooo." Ayo quipped. "At least you’ll be looking better then.”

“Oh, so you think I timed the illness for when he was away?” All three girls laughed.

“I hope you get well soon. I still need you for my planning, and we must all dance our legs off that night.” Jennifer bounced on her chair and took out some cards from her purse.

“Great, the cards are out.” Gladys reached out and collected one from her. Jennifer’s engagement party had been fixed for the night of Valentine’s Day in just about three weeks time.

“Yes, and you and Edward are the number one guests.”

The girls hashed out a tentative agenda for the party after Gladys had admired the card in glowing terms. They remained with her through dinner until her aunt arrived.

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  1. i'd send my review of the first chapter to your e-mail. hope you'd tell me what you think
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  2. Me first on mynewhitman's blog,unbelievable!!!
    *dancing the igbo dance*
    Let me go and read
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  3. lol@shorty.you were not first!!lol
    anyway,myne...im in chapter 9 of your novel, will try and pick up this weekend.
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  4. Ah ahn Hyaw see as u first me,mtscheew.

    Leggy laff at me well o,i was happy wen i saw 0 comments.lol

    Getting more interesting,cant wait for their wedding.
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  5. hmmm, this is good! next,next, next!
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  6. Thank you all esp HYAW and Leggy. I appreciate your efforts.

    @Shorty, LOL...sorry ooo. HYAW has first you this time. Maybe next time, LOL. Thanks for coming over

    @Omotee, thank you. It's coming soon.
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  7. Hahaha @ Shorty..
    Wow come and see dashed hopes lmao. Damn HYAW y u do shorty like that?
    Myne this is good lol, moreover hope Edward isn't cheatin while he's overseas? Wouldn't put it past him
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  8. nicee nicee!! Im going bak 2 find d beginning of they story! :D
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  9. Myne if I send you my email will you email me the complete draft of what you have so far..I am reading this late in the game
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  10. Keep up the good work oh. Love it.
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  11. Dont you think i need a copy of your book also
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  12. Thanks all, the book will soon be out so you can read it all together. Watch out for it.
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  13. Blessings.....
    I like how this read, it has a nice flow to it, draws you in and sweep you up into the story.

    Nice flow
    Keep writing.
    Have a fabulous weekend
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  14. LMAO @ Azazel, you no serious. Chei so our babe just fell sick like this. Aniwoos Myne I am still following these 2 closely. I will definitely be keeping an eye out for the book.
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  15. it keeps gettin better...I go love ooo!!!
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  16. Ooh pretty soon it'll be Edward and Gladys's cards getting printed out hehe
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  17. You really know how to capture your audience..i give that to you..
    Happy this is all bodin well for the love birds..
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  18. hey Myne,just checking on you..will be back
    xoxo
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  19. I go love ooo hehehehe nice read...keep it coming myne
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  20. Just here to echo all the comments. Great job Myne. PS - how many chapters does it have?
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  21. @Ms Fab. Thanks, it's in two parts with 21 characters.
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  22. You do have a way with words. I am going to go thru your archives and see if I can learn a thing or ten.
    Cheers!
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  23. I just love the way u write sha...very easy to read. Love does gladden the heart doesn't it?
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  24. @Isabi, thank you very much. I came over to yours but could not leave a comment. I like your he said, she said...

    @Parakeet, Yes it does, thanks for reading.
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  25. This story is getting more interesting! sheeettt!!!!
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  26. OK I'm all caught up...more more more more more more more please :)
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  27. Just finished reading AHTM last night and I enjoyed reading my 1st Naija romance in a long time and can't wait for your next book. Keep it up
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