Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Precious (Poem)

Your eyes flash with a fire
That shames that of sapphire
Your skin is from the mould
That poured the purest gold

Your hair is of a glory
Darker than the finest ebony
Your charm will never fade
Like that of an Indian jade

I need no tear in a pond
To compare to a diamond
Because your lips are ruddy
Redder yet than any ruby

Your smile glows so silvery
It cannot be rivaled by ivory
You’ve been made more perfect
Than the best crafted garnet

So like the jewels of the bold
Much too valuable to be sold
You have been made to be
Very very precious to me
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  1. you are really in a poetic mood oh.lol.
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  3. "You have been made to be
    Very very precious to me"

    how cute!
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  4. Dang Myne, how do you come up with these poems.
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  5. @Leggy, I wrote some of these earlier. New poems also come when I'm writing a story, like now.

    @Pimpette, Thanks.

    @Nice Anon, Blushing. Thank you.

    @Andrea. LOL, it just comes I guess. One word or thought is enough. But it takes some time to rhyme and polish.
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  6. wow wow wow..this is for real so cute and sweet..you gettin your game on really good woman and of course this was for hubby, right?

    Nice one..keep it comin...
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  9. Hahah my new hitman..
    Gosh i actually "understood this poem"..
    WOWSERS!! this is good lol, it rhymed very very well..
    I LIKE!!
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  10. love wan tin tin, i go love o - i love this
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  11. wow myne i have to say u are really talented writer/poet..i wanna cry just reading this cuz its really emotional...pls pls pls lemme copy this and give it to my bf ...
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  12. i love this! and the use of precious stones/jewels was very nice!
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  13. BVille Boys learn o! This is how to flow a girl :D
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  14. I thot I was the only one who noticed the use of precious stones in your rhymes but Burramint above too did.

    I am particularly wowed by folks who rhyme like this; you guys must probably come from another planet.
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  15. What a lovely poem. I can relate. Talk about love huh ;-) I especially loved the last verse. Finalized it beautifully.

    I wanted to stop by for the first time and thank you for loyally stopping by and commenting on my blog. it is much, much appreciated. I've never seen yours before, but now a follower!
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  16. Your hair is of a glory
    Darker than the finest ebony
    Your charm will never fade
    Like that of an Indian jade

    why do i get this strange feeling that you are writing about me

    hahahaha just joshing very nice poem
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  17. why do i get the funny feeling tht you are writing about me especially in the second stanza
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  18. Wow! This revealled the hidden gems (the Pearls, the diamond, the silver, the gold, the ivory and the ruby) that is inside of you. Please continue to lighten up the world with LOVE. I'm quite sure we're many that is loving this.
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  19. @Nimmo, my head is swelling. But I'm from this planet too.

    @Adaeze, Thanks for coming by, you're appreciated too.

    @Miss pumping; hey it's all about you. LOL. Thanks dear.

    @Anonymous, Thank you very much.
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  20. garnets and rubies...diamonds and Sapphires...Wow, Myne...WOW!
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  21. formerly stealth readerNov 4, 2009 12:43 PM
    its been a long time i encounteres a poem so utterly beautiful in its simplicity. this poem you have made to be precious to me lol
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  22. hey Myne, i like as you just they rhyme am well these days. i got your mail, i am reading.
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  23. gurl i've gotta borrow some of these jo for my diary. this is just as nice as u. lol. don't stop writing.
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  24. gurl i've gotta borrow some of these jo for my diary. this is just as nice as u. lol. don't stop writing.
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  26. Where were you when my hubby was trying to write me love poems? It's exotic and dearing.
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  27. Thank you all.

    Lady A, I hope you're writing for him too? LOL
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  28. Girl, that's a good idea but NOT, lol, lol! I have poured out my heart to him, now it's his turn....lol.
    But I do say special heart felt things to him.
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