Thursday, October 15, 2009

He'll come back to you.

Gladys began to cry quietly. “Thanks for saying that, I really appreciate it. It’s not as if I doubt it but it would be easier to ignore all the rumors if I were sure of Edward’s love.”

“And that’s another way you’re different from me and the main reason I’m telling you this now. You’re making the effort to know your man which I didn’t. Everyone said I shouldn’t lose this rich suitor so I grabbed on with both hands. I married for convenience and maybe that was the root of the rift that later occurred. I regretted my choices when it was already too late.”

“So you didn’t know he would be this way when you got married to him?"

“I had no idea. I came to Lagos at eighteen to learn fashion and designing with a woman from our village. The apprenticeship didn’t work out and I started casual work at one of the factories owned by my husband’s family. That was where we met and a year later we were married. I never asked if my background was a problem and just believed that if he could marry a poor girl, he would accept my family as well. We both know it didn't turn out that way."

“I hear you.” Gladys paused and wiped her face. “And that is why I want to be totally sure of Edward’s motives for wanting marriage. I’m certainly not with him for the money and I don’t want to hook up for convenience’s sake. There is no guarantee for the future but at least I think we need to start off from a strong basis of trust, love and respect.”

“That is something that both of you would have to talk through. And yes, he has to care deeply for you and what’s important to you. You have to be sure that he’s someone who can accept compromises too. I have found that one of the most important things in a partner.”

“I don’t know if Edward is willing to give us the chance. This may be the end. He hasn’t called in the past week…”

“Why don’t you call him?” Aunt Isioma raised both palms at the look Gladys gave her. “OK I know. The man must be the first to capitulate eh? Are you sure you did not say any damning things during the disagreement? Men and their egos can be so easily bruised.”

“I’m sure I didn’t. I only wanted him to spell out how he felt for me. I want him to make a commitment deeper than just wanting me physically.”

“Then don't worry; if it is the same Edward I know, he'll call you. One would have thought his eyes were clear enough on how he feels, but you young people. What can I say; you want to hear the words. Still I’m certain he’ll come back to you.”

"Do you think so? I'm beginning to fear..."

Aunt Isioma put one arm around her shoulders and wiped her tears with the other. "Cheer up dear. Don't lose hope, he’ll surely call. He’s probably deciding on the next step. Give him as much time as he needs to sort his thoughts out OK? It’s probably better you’re going to meet your family in Enugu. They’ll take your mind off things. And please do cheer up; Christmas day is next week you know?"

Gladys smiled and returned to her packing.

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  1. This is great. It felt like i was there.. nice.
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  2. I'm hopping for a bittersweet ending oh.

    When are we going to get it in print?
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  3. agree with enoch, bittersweet ending. jare


    seriously i wont lie, this girl don tire me
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  4. What is wrong with Gladys lettin down her hair? ..afterall she stormed out of the house.If you want somethin,you dont just want it.,you chase after it..Let her pick up her phone and call! waitin to see where this ends..
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  5. this kind of teaches a lot... well done!
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  6. Thanks for visiting my blogs; especially for making the effort to go through all three!!
    You are very creative yourself and I've read the previous two stories...You should think of getting it published into a book (if you've not done so already)...really really good! well done Myne.
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  7. Lol finally u remove this word verification thing.. Took u long enough hit man
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  8. Thanks for reading, once again. For those wanting bitter sweet ending, maybe, maybe not.

    @The poet, you're welcome

    @Controversy, you can imagine that I didn't even know at first. LOL
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  9. awww...poor Gladys, she's hurting!

    Mayne...this book is def gonna be a best seller..God willing, I looooveeee it!
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  10. I just caught up, very interesting stuff. Ahhh I am definitely curious to see what will happen with the 2.
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  11. ...okay i'm ready for them to get it together. Good to know they are both hurting. Somebody needs to make a move. Hopefully it Ed.
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  12. dis babe don tire me....
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  13. This is quite funny. Well atleast she has an aunt who is REALISTIC for one and understanding. Agro matter no be small thing oo lol. But i shall sit and continue to read.

    Poor Eddy. lol
    Poor Gladys too. hehehe
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  14. To be honest, I no be man but the babe don dey tire me sef. Ahn ahn!! Make up your darn mind joh!! lol
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  15. "...certain he’ll come back to you." Yes, 'they' always come back but, there is always that lil iota of doubt. He just may not come back. Short of which, his (not) coming back is not necessarily a function of him not loving her but, of been tired of trying to 'convince' her of his affection.
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  16. hmmm, these two get together already..
    me, i'm waiting for the explosive make-up that normally cones after the break-up..lol
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  17. Arguments near and during Christmas always go a bit wonky! She'll go to Enugu and he will start over-thinking everything!
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  18. tnk God someone is there to advice her......eyaaa am sure she is tired by now.......tnks for viewing my blog......nice write up
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  19. I have a lot of reading to do since I was here last.ok, let me start.
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  20. Myne, did you ever read Bertha M.Clay?

    You write conversationally. The story is in the conversation, not descriptive prose; like watching people talk.

    N.I.M.M.O
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  21. ummm....i dont really know what to say.kinda nice i guess.even though the stories leap.
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  22. Thanks for all your comments. I hope the next scene will satisfy some of the impatient ones. Check back next week.

    @Dith et al, I think Gladys knows what she wants, she just has to wait for Edward to get to the same page.

    @NIMMO, Yes I read BMC, infact I can't forget two of her books, Beyond Pardon and The Crucible. Those books had a huge impact on my growing psyche.
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  23. It needs some spice.
    somehow i feel only the scenes with edward and gladys have any spice
    other scenes don't add up.
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  24. @Tisha, Thanks for that feedback, I will surely consider that.
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