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Expectations II (Poem)

I’ve known you for over a year
Seemed there was naught to fear
You were more than a listening ear
So I told you that I care

Alas I was not left alone to fare
Tis a burden I no more have to bear
We have come together to share
Times of love, pain and cheer

My heart is open and bare
With you as a king without peer
I promise our love will not be mere
When you become my pair

You will be forever near
Others will have to go to the rear
It will no more be there and here
When I call out you will hear

Because you’re to me most fair
You’ll be all I hold dear
I’ll give you tender repair
Just reach out and I'll be there...

43 feedbacks:

Tisha said...

1st

Tisha said...

Love your poem

I hold back too much to write this brilliantly
sometimes i am totally perfect
other times i am inept

but
this is beautiful...

Fabulo-la said...

"I'll give u repair"?

Ion get...?

My Bestfriend's Little Sister(MBLS) said...

I love the rhyme and rhythm of this poem!

cutee said...

Like the poem :)

misspumping said...

haba babe you can compose gaan o
well scripted

Jemila said...

This is beautiful! :)

muyiwa said...

you ve got rhymes in your poem,nice one

BBB said...

as usual!!!!
filled with depth loved it

HYAW said...

good rhyming

TRYBES said...

ok,imma borrow your words someday,..like the flow..simple and beautiful..

Hope ur king got to see this?

Sugarking said...

Chai! see rhymes!! and I tot i could write!!! Good work woman!

Severus Snape said...

Nice rhyming and nice couplets too.
Beautiful imagery too!

BSNC said...

i like the flow abi na rhyming, nice!!!!!!

Myne Whitman said...

Thank you all, glad you enjoyed.

@Trybes, yeah he did. At the right time..

Fragilelooks said...

Daumn gurl. U got talent. Btifully written.

lucci said...

Much as i try to rhyme i fail miserably :-( lovely poem.

neefemi said...

nicely done.....:)

cici said...

nice...did u write this or it`s extract from somewhere?

Enoch said...

Very inspiring.

If love is a five stanza tail-rhyme, you just defined it.

Myne Whitman said...

Thanks all.

@Cici, no I composed it myself.

Fierce said...

wow... that was beautiful! I'm totally feeling the raw emotion behind that. Intense!

Blowing Blessings Your Way said...

love it!!!

Abena Opokua said...

beautiful beautiful. Myne you should let me "steal" some of your poems enh...

miss.fab said...

I am highly impressed that you managed to make the whole thing rhyme. Damn!

I promise our love will not be mere - lol I like this line a lot

posekyere said...

This is beautiful.
I think I love this poem and more.

histreasure said...

deep..i like and you really did make it rhyme..

talk abt extraordinary love

i sent you a mail..

Vimbai said...

So much tenderness and honesty, i really like it.

Bravo chica, you've got a serious gift :-)

Omotee! said...

this is deep.....and beautiful

i am privileged to know a great writer like you


u r allowed to blush!

Myne Whitman said...

I am blushing now, LOL. But you won't see it though..Thank you all. I appreciate.

BSNC said...

i really like your poems o..

Femme Lounge said...

whaoh! i likey, it makes great sense. thumbs up!

Femme Lounge said...

whaoh! i likey, it makes great sense. thumbs up!

Nana Yaw Asiedu said...

As I see it, not too deep, which has its allure. The language is lyrical, and you did well not to run out of words for the basic rhyme scheme of AAAA.

Parakeet said...

So simple yet lyrical...well done.

aeedeeaee said...

awww...i love it!

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aeedeeaee said...

"I'll give you tender repair" - Ilove that line...

yankeenaijababe said...

wow! this is some deep insightful post...girl, u got it always for us.

yankeenaijababe said...

am guessing am last today...lol

Bibi said...

awww, i'll give you tender repair. everyone needs them some tender repair. very lovely poem

Bibi said...

awww, i'll give you tender repair. everyone needs them some tender repair. very lovely poem

Ms. 'dufa said...

OMG! This is so good!!!! I totally love the rhyming scheme...

"tender repair"! I love it. Everything about this is just perfect!

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