I’ve known you for over a year
Seemed there was naught to fear
You were more than a listening ear
So I told you that I care
Alas I was not left alone to fare
Tis a burden I no more have to bear
We have come together to share
Times of love, pain and cheer
My heart is open and bare
With you as a king without peer
I promise our love will not be mere
When you become my pair
You will be forever near
Others will have to go to the rear
It will no more be there and here
When I call out you will hear
Because you’re to me most fair
You’ll be all I hold dear
I’ll give you tender repair
Just reach out and I'll be there...
Friday
Expectations II (Poem)
at 11:50 AM
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43 feedbacks:
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Love your poem
I hold back too much to write this brilliantly
sometimes i am totally perfect
other times i am inept
but
this is beautiful...
"I'll give u repair"?
Ion get...?
I love the rhyme and rhythm of this poem!
Like the poem :)
haba babe you can compose gaan o
well scripted
This is beautiful! :)
you ve got rhymes in your poem,nice one
as usual!!!!
filled with depth loved it
good rhyming
ok,imma borrow your words someday,..like the flow..simple and beautiful..
Hope ur king got to see this?
Chai! see rhymes!! and I tot i could write!!! Good work woman!
Nice rhyming and nice couplets too.
Beautiful imagery too!
i like the flow abi na rhyming, nice!!!!!!
Thank you all, glad you enjoyed.
@Trybes, yeah he did. At the right time..
Daumn gurl. U got talent. Btifully written.
Much as i try to rhyme i fail miserably :-( lovely poem.
nicely done.....:)
nice...did u write this or it`s extract from somewhere?
Very inspiring.
If love is a five stanza tail-rhyme, you just defined it.
Thanks all.
@Cici, no I composed it myself.
wow... that was beautiful! I'm totally feeling the raw emotion behind that. Intense!
love it!!!
beautiful beautiful. Myne you should let me "steal" some of your poems enh...
I am highly impressed that you managed to make the whole thing rhyme. Damn!
I promise our love will not be mere - lol I like this line a lot
This is beautiful.
I think I love this poem and more.
deep..i like and you really did make it rhyme..
talk abt extraordinary love
i sent you a mail..
So much tenderness and honesty, i really like it.
Bravo chica, you've got a serious gift :-)
this is deep.....and beautiful
i am privileged to know a great writer like you
u r allowed to blush!
I am blushing now, LOL. But you won't see it though..Thank you all. I appreciate.
i really like your poems o..
whaoh! i likey, it makes great sense. thumbs up!
whaoh! i likey, it makes great sense. thumbs up!
As I see it, not too deep, which has its allure. The language is lyrical, and you did well not to run out of words for the basic rhyme scheme of AAAA.
So simple yet lyrical...well done.
awww...i love it!
"I'll give you tender repair" - Ilove that line...
wow! this is some deep insightful post...girl, u got it always for us.
am guessing am last today...lol
awww, i'll give you tender repair. everyone needs them some tender repair. very lovely poem
awww, i'll give you tender repair. everyone needs them some tender repair. very lovely poem
OMG! This is so good!!!! I totally love the rhyming scheme...
"tender repair"! I love it. Everything about this is just perfect!
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