“Did I tell you how good you look in that top?”
“It’s a new one. Do you like it?” She stood and twirled before him with a smile. It was a tank top with spaghetti straps and girly frills edging around the bottom. She’d bought it from a girl who usually brought clothes to their office to sell on credit to the staff.
His eyes hooded in appreciation and he was glad he wore loose cargo shorts rather than tight jeans. She’d said red was her favorite color; this was a deep wine and it suited her glowing creamy skin to a tee. His gaze glommed to her as she sprawled back beside him. He opened the canned beer she had just set beside him and took a long cool drink.
“I watched the clips of Bolaji’s do, and you were by far the prettiest girl there.”
“Don’t you think you’re biased?” She held his gaze as she swallowed from her glass.
Edward shook his head and gulped the drink. It was a struggle not to follow her rippling throat down into the shadowed cleavage molded into pouting shape by the bodice of the top. They were seated on a sofa in her aunt’s sitting room and though that lady was supposed to be out, he still didn’t feel very comfortable with those kinds of thoughts in his head.
“Maybe it's time to go if you're ready; the literary club fills up quickly as you know and November meetings are more popular since they’re the last of the year." She avoided his eyes and he guessed she was also feeling the heat of their mutual desire.
He only grunted, his hand reaching out to her of their volition. He snagged her waist and pulled her to him. She wanted to stop him but just physically couldn’t. She was captivated by his touch and when he kissed her, she became weak. She wasn’t certain how far she was willing to let him go, but her whole body was practically aching for him and she kissed him back for all she was worth. She didn’t turn her face away when he pulled away to look at her. He framed her features with his large palms and her eyelids drifted closed.
She met him halfway as he bent his head to kiss her again. Her lips parted in welcome, even as she felt his hand move down her ears to her collarbone and then lower. He caressed the top of her heaving breasts for a while and then slid his fingers beneath the bodice of the top to touch her breast. It was a bold, unexpected and delicious caress that sent the moist heat swirling between her legs, and she moaned against his lips. His weight pressed her into the sofa and the heat of his chest encompassed her. Forcing herself to rise above the drugging haze of his caresses, Gladys pushed him back and turned her face away. It took her a minute to catch her breath then she stood and said the first thing that came to mind.
“Aunt Isioma will soon be back. Can we leave now?”
Edward flopped back on the sofa, while his eyes said spoilsport. He replied after catching his breath. "I just don't understand you. How can you stand there so calmly?"
"Edward, if I've told you once I've told you..."
"We’re in your aunt’s house? But this is the only place you’re ever alone with me or in public.” He was frustrated and didn't mind showing it. Can't a guy ever win?
Tuesday
Can't a guy ever win?
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23 feedbacks:
lol. pele, edward. u may have to trick her into staying over @ ur place oh. lol
Lol umm yeah aunty's place is a serious No No
I've been a bad follower, but I'm not lost! I'm still catching up! Nice!
nice one myne... methinks i have to go read previous posts.
interesting
i don't believe i would let a guy who is not married to me touch my boobs
and you do need to hold on and retain all the mystery.
until you get to know urselves a little better
I don't mean to be a spoilsport, but you need to know you can hold your head up in case it doesn't work out.
...otherwise the energy in your writing is just great.
sounds like I will have to buy a huge jug of milk and some potato chips just to catch up with the story.. sounding great already!
EHHHHHHHHHH , i am lost ooooo
Ok, i am back on point.
Tisha , this is light hearted oooo.I'd like to share your opinion but my reality is different
Thanks guys for catching up, and for all the wonderful comments. This is fiction but I write from my experience and those people I know so feel free to comment on what is happening in the story. I'm hoping to sample more opinions to polish the book.
Short summary, E and G have been dating for 6 months. She's 25 newly got a good job, he's 34 an MD. Story is set is Lagos, Nigeria
@Oreo, Wetin Aunty Isioma do now? :):)
@FFF, I think the guy is making those plans already, lol
@Controversy, Aunty's place is definitely a no no, but won't you be frustrated if you're Edward?
@Ms Dufa, Quaggar, Bagucci, Thanks for going back.
@Tisha, I find your comment interesting about not allowing a guy you're dating touch your boobs. Will this depend on how much you like him, how old you are or how long you date?
@Ttola, thanks for catching up and your comments are very appreciated.
myne,maybe i will order for the whole copy of your story so as to get it right
In her aunt's house.....sounds wrong 2 me.
keep cutting all dis steamy somethings short o....lol
I lyk it sha and 2 ans Ed's question, no.
lol @ d comments.
his aunt's house tho?? is he well??
might have to read previous posts to follow this...will do just that
@Dith, LOL, they call it congee.
@ESN, Thanks for reading.
Oh this is very hot! I can't wait for the next installment!
lol@ tisha...
...umm yea Aunt's house will be a no no. Is she going to keep fighting him tho'? He obviously wants a sexual relationship so hopefully she doesn't feel pressured into anything.
Let's see how it all plays out. Good work!!
Ok I need to catch up..I dont like being lost..This weekend I am probably gonna have to do some catching up..Your a good writer Myne..I dont know how many times I have told you that :)
Good writing!!..
guy's all riled up and who knows what would've happened if it wasn't aunty's house..keep it coming, girl
My God!
what was that???..............anyhw,I agree with Rep 1 that she shldnt b pressured in2 anythn o bcos its nt abt "winning".......
Thanks :)
I love how the cut out booties have the strap perfectly placed to show case the tattoo!
I have a question. I've had a conversation about being a writer w a good friend several times. Although I enjoy writing I often suffer writer's block at the beginning of my writing journey. I don't plan to become a writer, but just out of curiosity, how are you able to write so much? where do you draw your inspiration from and how do you keep all the works coming?!
-B
Hi B, most writers suffer a block along the line. One thing that helps me is to have an outline of the story either by chapter or by scene and then allow the characters to flow. When I'm stuck I try to take it easy, read other books, watch movies, and reread earlier chaps etc. I love writing novels otherwise another way to get over this is to write a short story which one can even finish in a sitting. My inspiration is from life, stories I read in other books, papers, blogs and some of my own opinions mixed in. I will like to read yours one day, hope you do write more.
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